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    The Two Worlds

    Scars and gold, which will shine brighter?

    By: Atino Teddy

    14 Nov, 2025

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    You wake on silk sheets,
    I wake to rooster cries.
    Your breakfast smells of buttered bread,
    mine, only hope,
    and sometimes nothing. 

    You ride to school in tinted cars,
    I walk,
    dust kissing my feet
    like it knows my name.

    Your hands hold pens of silver,
    mine hold dreams
    that tremble with hunger.

    At break time,
    You share laughter and juice,
    I share silence
    and the growl beneath my ribs.

    When the bell rings,
    You count grades,
    I count hours
    till I can fetch water
    before the sun forgets my path.

    Your evenings glow in soft lamplight,
    mine flicker by the moon’s mercy.
    You sleep beneath promises,
    I sleep beneath prayers.

    Yet in the mirror of tomorrow,
    We both will stand
    and maybe,
    just maybe,
    My scars will shine
    brighter than your gold.

    About the author

    Atino Teddy is a Ugandan poet, writer, and evangelist, pursuing a Bachelor of Arts in Education and Humanities at Gulu University. Her work delves into themes of resilience, women’s strength, climate change, and gender equality, blending historical, biblical, and contemporary perspectives to inspire .It's all about Attitude ( Positive) Atino Teddy is a Ugandan poet, writer, and evangelist studying at university. Her work focuses on contemporary themes, aiming to inspire a positive attitude. Arise and shine!

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